Feedback Wed 28 Jan

You need to be more selective in your points.  The descriptions of what you see in the films should include use of terminology (eg: the protagonists are on a train, rather than 'they are'; a seductive female in her early 20s rather than 'she'; panning shot rather than 'it goes to' etc).  Practise this from the start and you will be more successful in exams and evaluations.